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You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure.

You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure. mAB1
Dear Sir/Madam, My family and I are planning to visit Sydney next month and our friends, Jason and Annabelle, suggested your wonderful boutique hotel for accommodation. I was wondering if you could provide me some information about your establishment. To give you an idea, we will be three in total: my husband, me, and our ten-year-old daughter. Could you please tell me about the type of rooms you offer at your hotel and the number of guests they can accommodate? What are the other on-site facilities that you offer? Our daughter loves swimming, as do we, so I would like to know if you have a children’s pool as well as a swimming pool for adults on the premises. Do you also serve a buffet breakfast and is it included in the room rate? My husband and I are looking forward to having a couple’s massage, so I want to know if you offer that kind of service at your hotel. We are also planning to take a few day trips to nearby towns during our stay in Sydney. Do you have any group tours or excursions that might be family-friendly and not too demanding? We are not really interested in hiking but would love to check out nearby towns and get involved in some local activities and festivals. I would appreciate it if you could send me a brochure detailing the abovementioned information on my email address. I would be looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rose
Dear Sir/Madam,

My family and I are planning to visit Sydney
next
month and our friends, Jason and Annabelle, suggested your wonderful boutique hotel for accommodation. I was wondering if you could provide me
some
information about your establishment.

To give you an
idea
, we will be three in total: my husband, me, and our ten-year-
old
daughter. Could you
please
tell
me about the type of rooms you offer at your hotel and the number of guests they can accommodate? What are the other on-site facilities that you offer? Our daughter
loves
swimming, as do we,
so
I would like to know if you have a children’s pool
as well
as a swimming pool for adults on the premises. Do you
also
serve a buffet breakfast and is it included in the room rate? My husband and I are looking forward to having a couple’s massage,
so
I want to know if you offer that kind of service at your hotel.

We are
also
planning to take a few day trips to nearby towns during our stay in Sydney. Do you have any group tours or excursions that might be family-friendly and not too demanding? We are not
really
interested in hiking
but
would
love
to
check
out nearby towns and
get
involved in
some
local activities and festivals.

I would appreciate it if you could
send
me a brochure detailing the
abovementioned
information on my email address.

I would be looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rose
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IELTS letter You are planning a holiday to Australia. You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to the hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities. Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure.

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  American English
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249 words
6.0
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