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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer EQPB
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regard to the accomodation that I am currently residing at. I am sharing the room with another student and there are certain issues that are leading to difficulties in productive work. It is getting difficult to work as my room mate and I have to share the same study desk. Our work timings are different and when I am working, my room mate is doing other chores which is distracting me from working on my assignments. Furthermore, I also have concers about the cleanliness of the room as my room mate is not cooperating in this, and the messy room leads to distraction which further makes it difficult to work. Considering the above mentioned situation, I would like to change my accomodation and I prefer a studio room. I request you to change my room so that I don't have to face any kind of inconvenience in the near future, as I don't want any difficulties in working. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours Faithfully, Gayatri
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you in regard to the
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accomodation
that I am
currently
residing at. I am sharing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with another student and there are certain issues that are leading to difficulties in productive work.

It is getting difficult to work as my
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
room mate
and I
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have to
share the same study desk. Our work timings are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
and when I am working, my
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
room mate
is doing other chores which is distracting me from working on my assignments.
Furthermore
, I
also
have
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concers
about the cleanliness of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
as my
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
room mate
is not cooperating in this, and the messy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
leads to distraction which
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it difficult to work.

Considering the above mentioned situation, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my
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accomodation
and I prefer a studio
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I don't
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face any kind of inconvenience in the near future, as I don't want any difficulties in working.

Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Gayatri
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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