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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in participating in the environmental project published in the daily dawn newspaper. Firstly, I would like to address the problem we are facing in our community, is the waste bins are not collected and empty properly from the responsible authorities. Consequently, these overflooded bins produce lots of smells surrounding the community and air pollution. I would like to suggest a technological solution for the problem, that can deploy sensors that can measure the height of the waste before it gets overflooded and automatically send the notification with the location of the bins to the dustbin collection authority. Additionally with the help of these sensors house owners can also send messages to collect the waste outside from home. With the help of this technological solution, we can certainly control the local community's air pollution and a clean environment because the bins will be collected and empty on time before they get flooded. I hope to receive positive comments on the above-proposed solution and plans for approval. Yours faithfully, Mohtashim Khan
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest
in participating in
the environmental project published in the daily dawn newspaper.

Firstly
, I would like to address the problem we are facing in our community, is the waste bins are not collected and empty
properly
from the responsible authorities.
Consequently
, these
overflooded
bins produce lots of smells surrounding the community and air pollution.

I would like to suggest a technological solution for the problem, that can deploy sensors that can measure the height of the waste
before
it
gets
overflooded
and
automatically
send
the notification with the location of the bins to the dustbin collection authority.
Additionally
with the
help
of these sensors
house
owners can
also
send
messages to collect the waste outside from home.

With the
help
of this technological solution, we can
certainly
control the local community's air pollution and a clean environment
because
the bins will
be collected
and empty on time
before
they
get
flooded.

I hope to receive
positive
comments on the above-proposed solution and plans for approval.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mohtashim
Khan
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper published an advertisement

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  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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