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Write a letter to my boyfriend.

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It was two years ago tonight that you first told me you loved me and asked me to be your girlfriend. You changed my life that evening and put us on a path that has brought us such joy. When I look at you today, I realize my love for you grows deeper, richer, and more satisfying as time goes by. Whenever something good happens, you're the first person I want to tell. When something bad happens, I know that I can count on you to take me in your arms and tell me everything will be alright. I'm the luckiest woman in the world because I can truly say that I'm in love with my best friend. There's not another man in the world that can hold a candle to you, my darling, and I just wanted let you know that I love you more than even the most heartfelt words can express. With love from the one who adores you.
It was two years ago tonight that you
first
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told
me you
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loved
me and asked me to be your girlfriend. You
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changed
my life that evening and put us on a path that has brought us such joy.

When I look at you
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today
, I realize my
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love
for you grows deeper, richer, and more satisfying as time goes by. Whenever something
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
happens, you're the
first
person I want to
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tell
. When something
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bad
happens, I know that I can count on you to take me in your arms and
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tell
me everything will be alright.

I'm the luckiest woman in the world
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because
I can
truly
say that I'm in
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love
with my best friend. There's not another
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man
in the world that can hold a candle to you, my darling, and I
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just
wanted
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let
you know that I
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love
you more than even the most heartfelt words can express.

With
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
from the one who adores you.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to my boyfriend.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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