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Dear sir/Madam I am writing this letter to inform you that last week I received offer for Landscape designer from your company and I am very grateful for this opportunity but I regret to say that I cannot accept this position. I have known your company from decades that they have been completed many award winning projects. it will be honor for me to work with your company, I was flattered that you checked my online portfolio and considered me for this post. At the end of the day, I want to say that I am happy with my current job, currently the office location easy to go from my house also I want to finish my one of big on going project before switch to new job. I hope that in near future I will have a chance to work and be part of the success of your company. Thank you once again Yours Faithfully, John
Dear sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that last week I received offer for Landscape designer from your
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
company and
I am
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very
grateful for this opportunity
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but
I regret to say that I cannot accept this position.

I have known your
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company
from decades that they have
been completed
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many
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award winning
projects.
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it
will be honor for me to work with your
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company
, I
was flattered
that you
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checked
my online portfolio and considered me for this post.

At the
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end
of the day, I want to say that I am happy with my
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current
job,
currently
the office location easy to go from my
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house
also
I want to finish my one of
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big
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on going
project
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before
switch to new job.

I hope that in near future I will have a chance to work and be part of the success of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Thank you once again

Yours
Faithfully
,

John

IELTS letter letter writing to a company regarding offer

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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