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Tet is coming and you will have a week off. Your teachers planned to give you 30 exercises on Maths and 10 English essays. Write a letter to your teachers to propose less homework

Tet is coming and you will have a week off. Your teachers planned to give you 30 exercises on Maths and 10 English essays. Write a letter to your teachers to propose less homework x8DVQ
Dear Mrs. Giang I'm writting this letter to you to request for decline my homework in Tet holiday. You have gave me 30 exercises on Math and 10 English essays in the upcoming vacation. But it's too much for me in the 3 short days and I can't finish this much homework in this time. I know their importance and I've always thought that I will try my best to complete it. However, you know that I'm like you and everyone, I have a lot of importance things to do during Tet holiday. Moreover, I was also given homework for other subjects. I am very sorry if I can't meet your expectations, but I can guarantee that if the number of exercises is less, I will finish it well. So that the excercise will be completed in the most perfect way, I suggest you try halving the number of essays. Please consider my request and give me an answer as soon as you have a decision. Thanks for listening to my opinion. Your sincerely,
Dear Mrs.
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Giang


I'm
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writting
this letter to you to request for decline my homework in Tet holiday.

You have
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gave
me 30 exercises on Math and 10 English essays in the upcoming vacation.
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But
it's too much for me in the 3 short days and I can't finish this much homework in this time. I know their importance and I've always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that I will try my best to complete it.
However
, you know that I'm like you and everyone, I have
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a lot of
importance things to do during Tet holiday.
Moreover
, I was
also
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given
homework for other subjects. I am
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very
sorry if I can't
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meet
your expectations,
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but
I can guarantee that if the number of exercises is less, I will finish it well.
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So
that the
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excercise
will
be completed
in the most perfect way, I suggest you try halving the number of essays.

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Please
consider my request and give me an answer as
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soon
as you have a decision.

Thanks for listening to my opinion.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Tet is coming and you will have a week off. Your teachers planned to give you 30 exercises on Maths and 10 English essays. Write a letter to your teachers to propose less homework

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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