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Penfriend is moving to Sidney

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Dear Andy, How are you doing? I am glad to hear that you are planning to move to Sidney, that’s a huge change. And, if you want to enjoy your time in Australia, you should try to boost your English knowledge. One of the first things you need to practice is listening. As we are just penfriends, I am not aware of how good your listening skills are. Can you watch series or listen to podcasts in English without too much effort? That would be a good starting point, as it will help you with your vocabulary as well. In addition, you should try to practice your speaking as much as you can. Even if you do not have a friend to talk to in English, you can at least try to read aloud to improve your pronunciation and fluency. I am looking forward to hearing all about your adventures in Sidney, so please keep me posted! Best regards, Carlos
Dear Andy,

How are you doing? I am glad to hear that you are planning to
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move
to Sidney, that’s a huge
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change
. And, if you want to enjoy your time in Australia, you should try to boost your English knowledge.

One of the
first
things you need to practice is listening. As we are
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penfriends, I am not aware of how
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good
your listening
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skills
are. Can you
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watch
series or listen to podcasts in English without too much effort? That would be a
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good
starting point, as it will
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help
you with your vocabulary
as well
.

In addition
, you should try to practice your speaking as much as you can. Even if you do not have a friend to talk to in English, you can at least try to read aloud to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your pronunciation and fluency.

I am looking forward to hearing all about your adventures in Sidney,
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so
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please
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keep
me posted!

Best regards,

Carlos
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IELTS letter Penfriend is moving to Sidney

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  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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