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I am sending you your writing sample and homework. Similarly, you will have to write an email to your partner telling him/her about you daily life or typical day.

I am sending you your writing sample and homework. Similarly, you will have to write an email to your partner telling him/her about you daily life or typical day. ok86B
Dear Chinh, How are you? Is the Covid 19 situation in your place more stable? Most of the the time I was at home, what did you do in a day? As for me, my day is very intersting. I will tell you about my daily routine. Usually I wake up at 6: 30am, during which time I brush my teeth, wash my face and do morning excercises. Then I have a class schedule at 7: 00, I will go to the room to prepare books to study. Because of the epidemic situation, we have to study online. My friends and I have not met yet, I am curious about my new friends. I feel very interested in learning. I like study English, each of my subjects lasts 50 minutes and we have a break between classes. My class ends at 10: 40am. Next, I will go down to cook rice and have lunch. I often take a nap, every day we spend 30minutes or 1 hour to sleep will be very good for health. Do you like to play sports? In the afternoon, I will spend about 2 hours jogging and playing sports. Around 6-7pm, I will cook with my mother, my family will eat dinner together, chat after a day of work and study. My favorite time is 9pm, when everyone will return to their rooms. I usually sit down to learn tomorrow’s homework, add a little more gentle music. After all the work is done, I will rush to my precious bed and have a good night’s sleep. It’s my day, how about you? Hope to hear from you soon, Your friends, Anh
Dear
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Chinh
,

How are you?

Is the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
situation in your place more stable? Most of
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.
the the
time I was at home, what did you do in a day? As for me, my day is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
intersting
. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about my daily routine.

Usually
I wake up at 6: 30am, during which time I brush my teeth, wash my face and do morning
Possible spelling mistake found.
excercises
.

Then I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
schedule at 7: 00, I will go to the room to prepare books to study.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of the epidemic situation, we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
study online. My friends and I have not met
yet
, I am curious about my new friends.

I feel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interested in learning. I like study English, each of my subjects lasts 50
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
minutes and
we have a break between classes. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
ends at 10: 40am.

Next
, I will go down to cook rice and have lunch. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
take a nap, every day we spend 30minutes or 1 hour to sleep will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for health. Do you like to play sports? In the afternoon, I will spend about 2 hours jogging and playing sports. Around 6-7pm, I will cook with my mother, my family will eat dinner together, chat after a day of work and study.

My favorite time is 9pm, when everyone will return to their rooms. I
usually
sit down to learn tomorrow’s homework,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
more gentle music.
After all
the work
is done
, I will rush to my precious bed and have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
night’s sleep. It’s my day, how about you?

Hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
,

Your friends,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Anh
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IELTS letter I am sending you your writing sample and homework. Similarly, you will have to write an email to your partner telling him/her about you daily life or typical day.

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  American English
11 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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