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You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor. • apologise for the delay • explain why it is late • request an extension.

You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor. • apologise for the delay • explain why it is late • request an extension. awm5o
Dear __sir, _ _ _ _ I am writing to apologise for not completing my proj ect on I nformation and Technology. I am extremely sorry for not meeting t he deadline you set and rea lise that the delay will cause you a lot of inconvenience. Unfortunately, I had domestic problems to deal with recently. My mother is currently recovering at home after a major operation and I need to look after her. I n view of this, I would be very grateful if you could allow me to have more t ime to complete this important assignment. Ideally, I require an additional week so t hat I can proofread it and check my references. I also need to write my conclusion but as I have already managed to prepare the outline of the summary. It should not take too long. Once again, I regret t his extremely unfortunate delay but hope to submit it by the end of next week. Yours sincerely, John Smith
Dear __sir, _ _ _ _

I am writing to
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apologise
for not completing my
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proj ect
on
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I nformation
and Technology. I am
extremely
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sorry


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for
not meeting t
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he deadline
you set and
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rea
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lise
that the delay will cause you
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a lot of
inconvenience.

Unfortunately, I had domestic problems to deal with recently. My mother is
currently
recovering at home
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after


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a
major operation and I need to look after her.

I n view of this, I would be
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very
grateful if you could
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allow
me to have more
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t ime
to complete this
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important


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assignment
.
Ideally
, I require an additional week
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so
t hat I can proofread it and
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check
my references. I
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also


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need
to write my conclusion
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but
as I have already managed to prepare the outline of the summary. It
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should


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not
take too long.

Once again, I regret t his
extremely
unfortunate delay
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but
hope to submit it by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of
next
week.

Yours
sincerely
, John Smith
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IELTS letter You are a student in a college and have not yet completed an important assignment for your course. You are writing a letter to your tutor. • apologise for the delay • explain why it is late • request an extension.

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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