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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest to you the name of the person who should get an award for helping our community. I think Mr. Smith is a good choice to give this award. He helped the community lots of times by raising funds. I think he should be awarded by 'Life Saver' prize. Mr. Smith is a kind heart person and always ready to help someone who is in need. Many times he saved the life of our city people. The reason why I recommended his name is because last month he raised $20, 000 for a man who lost his one leg in a car accident. He requested all the people of the town to give some donations so that the injured guy can have an artificial leg and will be able to walk again. The best title for him should be 'Life Saver' or something related which you think is perfect for a man like him. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

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an award for helping our community. I
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think
Mr. Smith is a
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choice to give this award. He
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helped
the community lots of times by raising funds. I
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think
he should
be awarded
by 'Life Saver' prize. Mr. Smith is a kind heart person and always ready to
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help
someone who is in need.
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times he saved the life of our city
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The reason why I recommended his name is
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last month he raised $20, 000 for a
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man
who lost his one leg in a car accident. He requested all the
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people
of the town to give
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donations
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that the injured guy can have an artificial leg and will be able to walk again.

The best title for him should be 'Life Saver' or something related which you
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think
is perfect for a
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like him.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

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  American English
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164 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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