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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/ her on next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend.

Dear Ayesha, I got your letter yesterday and i am very thankful to you for inviting me to spend my next holidays at your place. I want to explain you that this year it is not possible for me to visit you. Reason behind it is my sister's wedding, which is on my next vacation. There will be a lot of work in my home and i have many duties on my shoulders. As my father and elder brother will be busy in their jobs so i have to take ladies of my house to the shopping. And most important thing is on day of event, i have to look after the decoration of the hall and the rest of the mangement. For which i have search different places and booked the best one for my sister's wedding I hope know you will understand my sorry for not visiting you this time. But i do visit you next year. I also make list of things, which i plan to do it together and we will have great time. Soon i will send you the invitation of my sister's wedding and waiting for you and your family for visit. Payy regards to your family Yours faithfully, Ali
Dear Ayesha, I
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got
your letter yesterday and
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i
am
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very
thankful to you for inviting me to spend my
next
holidays at your place. I want to
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explain
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you
that this year it is not possible for me to visit you. Reason behind it is my sister's wedding, which is on my
next
vacation. There will be
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a lot of
work in my home and
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i
have
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many
duties on my shoulders. As my father and elder brother will be busy in their jobs
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so
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i
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have to
take ladies of my
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house
to the shopping. And most
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important
thing is on day of
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event
,
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i
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have to
look after the decoration of the hall and the rest of the
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mangement
. For which
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i
have search
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different
places and booked the best one for my sister's wedding I hope know you will understand my sorry for not visiting you this time.
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But
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i
do visit you
next
year. I
also
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make
list of things, which
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i
plan to do it
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together and
we will have great time.
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Soon
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i
will
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send
you the invitation of my sister's wedding and waiting for you and your family for visit.
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Payy
regards to your family Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Ali

IELTS letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/ her on next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
205 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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