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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Smith I hope thie letter will find you in healthy hands. I am your neighbour living in your right hand side of you apartment. I just moved here a week ago with my family. We are planning to hold a bash for our new apartment and for that we are going to invite some of our friends to our home. And the party will be on this weekend at 8 pm in the evening. As in my family there are two young children who insist me to get music band for the evening that, may make noise and in consquence, your family will get disturb. I am sorry in advance for coming evening. I hope you will understand me. Still, we will try to keep the volume low of music to not spoil your night. Also, I will be glad if you and your family will join us on that day. I this will be a good way to introduce ourselves to each other. your faithfully Victor
Dear Mr. Smith

I hope
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thie
letter will find you in healthy hands. I am your
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.
neighbour
living in your
Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?
right hand
side of you apartment.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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just
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moved
here a week ago with my family.

We are planning to hold a bash for our new apartment and for that we are going to invite
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some
of our friends to our home. And the party will be on this weekend at 8
This is redundant. Consider using "pm".
pm in the evening
. As in my family there are two young children who insist me to
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get
music band for the evening that, may
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make
noise and in
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consquence
, your family will
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get
disturb. I am sorry in advance for coming evening. I hope you will understand me.

Still
, we will try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the volume low of music to not spoil your night.
Also
, I will be glad if you and your family will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
us on that day.
Did you mean "If" or is a comma missing ("I,")?
I
this will be a
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good
way to introduce ourselves to each other.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
faithfully


Victor
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.