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A friend who lives in an other country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. acept

Dear Ali, I just have received your letter, in which asking me to join you in London on my vacations. I am very pleased to receive such offer and would love to spend some time with you just like before, when we were living in Pakistan. Unfortunately, as you already know I am studying ACCA and attempting exams every six months. This time my exams are starting right after my winter holidays and I am afraid that I will not get any time for revision after my vacations. In addition to this problem, as you know that London is very cold during the winter and I am allergic to cold weather. Lets plan out meetup in summer vacations in four months. We can visit beaches and do lots of activities, which are cannot be performed during winters. Thank you for considering my request. Your faithfully, Abdul

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just
 have received your letter, in which asking me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in London on my vacations. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to receive such offer and would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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 I am afraid that I will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 any time for revision after my vacations. In addition
 to this problem, as you know that London is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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cold
 during the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).winter, and
winter and
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cold
 weather. Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?Let's
Lets
 plan out meetup in summer vacations in four months. We can visit beaches and do lots of activities, which are cannot be performed
 during winters. Thank you for considering my request. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
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Abdul