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A friend who lives in an other country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. acept

Dear Ali, I just have received your letter, in which asking me to join you in London on my vacations. I am very pleased to receive such offer and would love to spend some time with you just like before, when we were living in Pakistan. Unfortunately, as you already know I am studying ACCA and attempting exams every six months. This time my exams are starting right after my winter holidays and I am afraid that I will not get any time for revision after my vacations. In addition to this problem, as you know that London is very cold during the winter and I am allergic to cold weather. Lets plan out meetup in summer vacations in four months. We can visit beaches and do lots of activities, which are cannot be performed during winters. Thank you for considering my request. Your faithfully, Abdul
Dear Ali, I
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have received your letter, in which asking me to
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join
you in London on my vacations. I am
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very
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pleased
to receive such offer and would
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love
to spend
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some
time with you
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just
like
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before
, when we were living in Pakistan. Unfortunately, as you already know I am studying
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ACCA
and attempting exams every six months. This time my exams are starting right after my winter
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
holidays and
I am afraid that I will not
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get
any time for revision after my vacations.
In addition
to this problem, as you know that London is
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very
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cold
during the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
winter and
I am allergic to
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cold
weather.
Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?
Lets
plan out meetup in summer vacations in four months. We can visit beaches and do lots of activities, which are cannot
be performed
during winters. Thank you for considering my request.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Abdul

IELTS letter A friend who lives in an other country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. acept

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  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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