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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear sir, I am Anita studet of the part time course of programming training in your institute. I am informing you that I would not be able to continue to attend the class becase of the launch of new project in my company. I am working as full time application program analyst with TCS and due to project launch, it demads more time. In regads to that, I have deadlines to ahead to meet them, for which I have to work more time with my entire team in leading for completion. However, The programming training is important to build my skills toward current job and responsibilities. Though, the lunch of project need my supervision with team which force me to pause my course at this time. I hope to consider my request for allowing me to contine with this couse in next batch, since I have paid the entire amount of the fees. This woule help me to manage my office work at this time and can be continue with the course later. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you. Anita
Dear sir,

I am Anita
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studet
of the part
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course of programming training in your institute. I am informing you that I would not be able to continue to attend the
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class
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becase
of the launch of new project in my
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company
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I
am working as full
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time
application program analyst with TCS and due to project launch, it
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demads
more
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time
. In
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regads
to that, I have deadlines
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to ahead to
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meet
them, for which I
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have to
work more
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time
with my entire team in leading for completion.
However
, The programming training is
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important
to build my
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skills
toward
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current
job and responsibilities.
“Though” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Though
, the lunch of project need my supervision with team which force me to pause my course at this time.

I hope to consider my request for allowing me to
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contine
with this
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couse
in
next
batch, since I have paid the entire amount of the fees. This
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woule
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help
me to manage my office work at this
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time
and can be
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continue
with the course later.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Thank you.

Anita
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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