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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Dr, Durham, I am Apurva Mathur, your student in the university in 2019 batch. This letter is regarding the issue of a reference letter for a new job. Sir, I have just got an opportunity to work with the Calian Group of companies, which is one of the most renowned company. I will be getting a post of consultant Clinical Psychologist. There is also a salary raise from the previous job. The working hours are also suitable for me. It is like a dream job for me, as the salary is good, working hours are perfect, and the post is of consultant. The company requires a reference letter for my job documents. On enquiring from the university, I got the information that I would need to contact you as you were our head teacher. Kindly, issue me a reference letter saying what was my specialisation and my performance. You could also suggest how were my team working skills. Kindly send the letter at the earliest as I need to submit all by documents within 15 days. Yours Sincerely, Apurva Mathur
Dear Dr, Durham,

I am
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Apurva
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, your student in the university in 2019 batch. This
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is regarding the issue of a reference
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for a new job.

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an opportunity to work with the
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, which is one of the most renowned
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. I will be getting a post of consultant Clinical Psychologist. There is
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a salary raise from the previous job. The working hours are
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suitable for me.

It is like a dream job for me, as the salary is
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good
, working hours are perfect, and the post is of consultant.

The
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company
requires a reference
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for my job documents. On
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enquiring
from the university, I
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the information that I would need to contact you as you were our head teacher. Kindly, issue me a reference
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letter
saying what was my
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specialisation
and my performance. You could
also
suggest how were my team working
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skills
.

Kindly
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at the earliest as I need to submit all by documents within 15 days.

Yours
Sincerely
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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180 words
6.0
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