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You have spent a week with your friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you have left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Dear John, The last week spend with you was one of the most memorable times in my life. It was so good to visit Jaipur with you. Thankyou for such a great experience, to be able to visit and study the rich culture of the city was a breath-taking experience. The friendliness of the people was also such a good experience. as we know that good times fly, same has happened here, we were there for around a week but it seemed like an eye blink. In the aura of the place and experience I forgot to pick my wallet from the bed side drawer of your room. I would request you to kindly pack the wallet and courier it to me on my address. Or you can send it to me by local post but in this case you will need to seal the wallet very appropriately. Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Hope to see you soon on another great holiday, we can plan a holiday to my town, Hyderabad next time. It would be really great to explore the city with you. Take care, Apurva
Dear John,

The last week spend with you was one of the most memorable times in my life. It was
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to visit Jaipur with you.

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Thankyou
for such a great
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experience
, to be able to visit and study the rich culture of the city was a breath-taking
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experience
. The friendliness of the
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people
was
also
such a
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good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
.
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as
we know that
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good
times
fly
, same has happened here, we were there for around a week
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but
it seemed like an eye blink.

In the aura of the place and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experience
I forgot to pick my wallet from the bed side drawer of your room. I would request you to kindly pack the wallet and courier it to me on my address. Or you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it to me by local post
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but
in this case
you will need to seal the wallet
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very
appropriately
. Sorry for the inconvenience caused.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
on another great holiday, we can plan a holiday to my town, Hyderabad
next
time. It would be
really
great to explore the city with you.

Take care,

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Apurva

IELTS letter You have spent a week with your friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you have left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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6.0
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