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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with the award for people who have hepled the community. I would like to suggest a person who have served the community better. My name is Johnson, a resident of the local community since 8 years and i would like to propose Mr. Ramu for his incredible work he has done in maintaining the community clean and green by his various activities like helping in cleaning the roads by establishing a voluntary group and educating people about the importance of keeping the surroundings clean to avoid diseases and planting trees. Also, he has been helping the old people by providing necessary assistance in getting their groceries from supermarkets and young children by arranging various sport activites to encourage them being physically fit. Therefore, I would like to propose Mr. Ramu for the best volunteer award for helping the community. Yours sincerely Johnson
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection with the award for
people
who have hepled the
community
. I would like to suggest a person who have served the
community
better.

My name is Johnson, a resident of the local
community
since 8 years and i would like to propose Mr. Ramu for his incredible work he has done in maintaining the
community
clean and green by his various activities like helping in cleaning the roads by establishing a voluntary group and educating
people
about the importance of keeping the surroundings clean to avoid diseases and planting trees.

Also
, he has been helping the
old
people
by providing necessary assistance in getting their groceries from supermarkets and young children by arranging various sport activites to encourage them being
physically
fit.

Therefore
, I would like to propose Mr. Ramu for the best volunteer award for helping the community.

Yours
sincerely


Johnson
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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