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Task 1 Your local has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. give details of when you would be available for this work.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to express my interest in voluntary work at your hospital which advert on 14th of December, 2020. I am s student of medical and now I am at the bottom line of my study in CMC. Today or tomorrow I have to serve people, as my future work is not only going to be my profession but also to serve humanity. My wish to take this opportunity as my experience or you can say internship. However, having a degree in M. B. B. S injecting patient, examine the blood pressure and blood sugar is part my study. Apart from this, I can also prescribed few medicine regarding seasonal flu and so on. My CV is attached with the letter where you can find out my expertise without any subterfuge. It is said that patient require nurturing more than medicine. A smiling face with care, a reliable hand with love can work as a game changer which sometime out-turn more than medicine. Money can buy everything except mental peace. The relief I am going to get by serving the sick that knew no bounds. Anyway, I have already mentioned in the letter that I am a last year student of medicine, I have classes from 9 to 3 but in the weekend I am free but If any emergency come out I will definitely rush on my work. My contact details and cell number attached with my CV. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully Zebun Nessa
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to express my interest in voluntary
work
at your hospital which advert on 14th of December, 2020.

I am s student of medical and
now
I am at the bottom line of my study in CMC.
Today
or tomorrow I
have to
serve
people
, as my future
work
is not
only
going to be my profession
but
also
to serve humanity. My wish to take this opportunity as my experience or you can say internship.

However
, having a degree in M. B. B. S injecting patient, examine the blood pressure and blood sugar is part my study. Apart from this, I can
also
prescribed few
medicine
regarding seasonal flu and
so
on. My CV
is attached
with the letter where you can find out my expertise without any subterfuge. It
is said
that patient require nurturing more than
medicine
. A smiling face with care, a reliable hand with
love
can
work
as a game changer which sometime out-turn more than
medicine
. Money can
buy
everything except mental peace. The relief I am going to
get
by serving the sick that knew no bounds.

Anyway, I have already mentioned in the letter that I am a last year student of
medicine
, I have classes from 9 to 3
but
in the weekend I am free
but
If any emergency
come
out I will definitely rush on my
work
. My contact
details
and cell number attached with my CV.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully


Zebun Nessa
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IELTS letter Task 1 Your local has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do. give details of when you would be available for this work.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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