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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thanks them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnt write earlier invite them to come and stay wth you

Dear Ram, Hope you are doing well. I really had a good time with you guys. I received the photos last week so I thought I will write to you on how relaxed I am after the vacation. I enjoyed two weeks and feels relaxed from my busy schedule, when i got back home I did not feel my vacation was hectic moreover I felt so relaxed. You guys gave me an amazing and unforgettable experience in London. Although I wanted to write this letter last week, I got busy with my work and household chores, I know its late on the contrary, I know both of you can understand me too. Since you are travelling to India in April I am inviting you to my home. I would suggest you to either land in Delhi or fly from Delhi. Although you will be reaching for short span with lots of work to do and functions to attend I would suggest you to spend at least 3 days with me. Hope to see you soon. With Love, Raj
Dear Ram,

Hope you are doing well. I
really
had a
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good
time with you guys. I received the photos last week
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so
I
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thought
I will write to you on how relaxed I am after the vacation.

I enjoyed two weeks and feels relaxed from my busy schedule, when i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
back home I did not feel my vacation was hectic
moreover
I felt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
relaxed. You guys gave me an amazing and unforgettable experience in London. Although I wanted to write this letter last week, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
busy with my work and household chores, I know its late
on the contrary
, I know both of you can understand me too. Since you are travelling to India in April I am inviting you to my home. I would suggest you to either land in Delhi or
fly
from Delhi. Although you will be reaching for short span with lots of work to do and functions to attend I would suggest you to spend at least 3 days with me.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

Raj

IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thanks them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnt write earlier invite them to come and stay wth you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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