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Letter of complaint to a problem

Dear Contact Name, For the past ten years, I have followed your career through news events, interviews, and web research. Your dedication to the media and your understanding of the important role journalists play in today's fast-paced information highway, coupled with your belief in the power of the press, is exemplary. I have had the privilege of honing my journalistic abilities on three widely different publications. When I left college, I immediately went to work for the typical small town newspaper and learned all aspects of getting the paper to the people in a timely manner. I then moved to become Regional Manager for a media corporation composed of small- to mid-sized newspapers in the Midwest. In my current position, I am Chief Correspondent for one of the largest newspapers in the Southwest. I would like an opportunity to visit with you to get your insight and suggestions on where my skills and abilities would be of the greatest value to the ABD Company, and to inquire about possible job openings with the company. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.
Dear Contact Name,

For the past ten years, I have followed your career through news
events
, interviews, and web research.

Your dedication to the media and your understanding of the
important
role journalists play in
today
's
fast
-paced information highway, coupled with your belief in the power of the press, is exemplary.

I have had the privilege of honing my journalistic abilities on three
widely
different
publications. When I
left
college, I immediately went to work for the typical
small
town newspaper and learned all aspects of getting the paper to the
people
in a timely manner. I then
moved
to become Regional Manager for a media corporation composed of
small
- to mid-sized newspapers in the Midwest. In my
current
position, I am Chief Correspondent for one of the largest newspapers in the Southwest.

I would like an opportunity to visit with you to
get
your insight and suggestions on where my
skills
and abilities would be of the greatest value to the ABD
Company
, and to inquire about possible job openings with the
company
.

I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.
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IELTS letter Letter of complaint to a problem

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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