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You find that your study load is too heavy and you would like to withdraw from two courses.

Dear Sir I am Robin, second year student of MBA in your university. I am writing this with regards to withdraw of my registration from two language courses. As second year students were given options to register for language classes of French and Spanish, I registered myself for same but now it is not possible for me to continue with classes. Let me explain you my situation. As I am final year student, I have to publish one research project by the end of this year to complete my degree. This research project indeed needs alot of time, so I am working around the clock to complete my project on time. Moreover I have one re-appear exam also which I missed in last semester due to my accident. Although I am interested to learn Spanish and French but could not have enough time to attend classes. Moreover, Spanish class timing clash with MIS course. I request you to discontinue my registration for both said courses. I would be very obliged to you if you could refund my course fee which is 200 dollar per course. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfullyAman

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 student of MBA in your university. I am writing this with regards to withdraw of my registration from two language You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
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class
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course
. I request you to discontinue my registration for both said You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
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very
 obliged to you if you could refund my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 fee which is 200 dollar per course.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfullyAman