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a friend of your is thinking to go for camping holiday for the first time in summer. He has asked for your advise.

Dear Martin, I am very pleased to know that you are considering going on a camping holiday this time and believe I would be able to give you some great suggestions to make it a memorable event. I used to go to such events earlier with some other friends and found it a very amazing experience. Although there are many advantages of camping, I would like to highlight a few for your consideration. The first one in my mind is that it will help us going away from technology like Wifi & TV and spend quality time with our family. In addition to that, such an event will also help us to prepare delicious food which is usually not possible in the home kitchen. If you wonder, I am talking about dishes like Bar B Q on the coal and Steam Mutton prepared in a big pot under the sand. While camping is an enjoyable event, I would like to draw your attention to some problems which can come across and are important to consider. The key problem is snakes! Usually, they roam outside in the summer season and are dangerous. We need to be very careful of this and bring some medicine to cure in the event of a bite by a dangerous creature. Furthermore, we need to arrange a portable washroom since these are mostly not available in remote areas. Having said above, I would certainly like to be part of this get-together and confident that we can make this event unforgettable. My wife is also very fond of such an event and will be very happy to know about this. Regards Naeem Khan

Dear Martin,

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Regards

Naeem Khan