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Dear Mr J, I'm writing to you to express my serious concern over the recent issue relating to the latest product namely electricity software which I have bought through your A company's website.

Dear Mr J, I'm writing to you to express my serious concern over the recent issue relating to the latest product namely electricity software which I have bought through your A company's website. The main complaints I have noticed is that. . . Initially, this device was delivered to my office, and I was so fascinated when I received it. Unfortunately, I found it sorely disappointing as it had under-expected quality regarding the running process. Specifically, not only did numerous gears reject my laptop, but it also made a systematic error while I set the process. This putting my laptop on indefinite hiatus this made my laptop automatically halted operations This led to my laptop's activities being suspended. No matter how hard I attempt to reset entire devices, they proceed to a damaged state without responding. To resolve the above problems, I am hoping that you will agree to replace it with a new one and for free. Moreover, I would like you to fully refund and rectify my current error that my laptop has been facing. I hope that you will take action soon, and I look forward to hearing your response. Your sincerely,
Dear Mr J, I'm writing to you to express my serious concern over the recent issue relating to the latest product
namely
electricity software which I have
bought
through your A
company
's website.

The main complaints I have noticed is that. . .

Initially
, this device
was delivered
to my office, and I was
so
fascinated when I received it. Unfortunately, I found it
sorely
disappointing as it had under-
expected
quality regarding the running process.
Specifically
, not
only
did numerous gears reject my
laptop
,
but
it
also
made a systematic error while I set the process.

This putting my
laptop
on indefinite hiatus

this made my
laptop
automatically
halted operations

This led to my laptop's activities
being suspended
. No matter how
hard
I attempt to reset entire devices, they proceed to a damaged state without responding.

To resolve the above problems, I am hoping that you will
agree
to replace it with a new one and for free.
Moreover
, I would like you to
fully
refund and rectify my
current
error that my
laptop
has been facing.

I hope that you will take action
soon
, and I look forward to hearing your response.

Your
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Dear Mr J, I'm writing to you to express my serious concern over the recent issue relating to the latest product namely electricity software which I have bought through your A company's website.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
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