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You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
• state your reason for writing
• describe the problems and explain how you feel
• propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action Dear Miss Grewal, I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue.I am writing a complain about the fact that we do not have any hot water or heating for some time. As you know, we have been living in your place since December and also paid our rent on time.We have had not any hot water from last two weeks and it makes our life very difficult ,especially during the midest of the winter.I called you last week and you said you would send the workmen within 2-3 days ,but he didn’t came. After calling 4-5 times ,

You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problems and explain how you feel • propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action Dear Miss Grewal, I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue. I am writing a complain about the fact that we do not have any hot water or heating for some time. As you know, we have been living in your place since December and also paid our rent on time. We have had not any hot water from last two weeks and it makes our life very difficult, especially during the midest of the winter. I called you last week and you said you would send the workmen within 2-3 days, but he didn’t came. After calling 4-5 times, yX7x3
You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: 
• state your reason for writing
• describe the problems and explain how you feel
• propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action Dear Miss Grewal, I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue. I am writing a complain about the fact that we do not have any hot water or heating for some time. As you know, we have been living in your place since December and also paid our rent on time. We have had not any hot water from last two weeks and it makes our life very difficult, especially during the midest of the winter. I called you last week and you said you would send the workmen within 2-3 days, but he didn’t came. After calling 4-5 times, eventually workmen came to our place after 5 days. Unfortunately, he said he could not fix the problem because the boiler is too old. This situation makes us very unhappy as we have to live without heating during this winter season. We want to continue to pay our rent as a tenants at your property. So, you have to arrange an emergency repair to be made. We also request you to give 40% discount to us on our rent during the period we have been without hot water or heating. Hoping for an early reply from you. Regards, Navneet Kaur.
You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot
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water
or heating for
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some
time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to
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fix
the problem
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but
without success.

Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
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• state your reason for writing
•
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describe
the problems and
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explain
how you feel
• propose a solution and
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risk
the landlord to take
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
action


Dear Miss
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Grewal
,

I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue. I am writing a
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
about the fact that we do not have any hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
or heating for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time.

As you know, we have been living in your place since December and
also
paid our rent on time. We have had not any hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
from last two weeks and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
our life
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very
difficult,
especially
during the
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midest
of the winter. I called you last week and you said you would
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send
the workmen within 2-3 days,
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but
he didn’t
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came
. After calling 4-5 times,
eventually
workmen came to our place after 5 days. Unfortunately, he said he could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
the problem
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because
the boiler is too
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old
. This situation
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makes
us
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very
unhappy as we
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have to
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live
without heating during this winter season.

We want to continue to pay our rent as
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a tenants
at your property.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, you
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have to
arrange an emergency repair to
be made
. We
also
request you to give 40% discount to us on our rent during the period we have been without hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
or heating.

Hoping for an early reply from you.

Regards,

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Navneet
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Kaur
.
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IELTS letter You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problems and explain how you feel • propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action Dear Miss Grewal, I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue. I am writing a complain about the fact that we do not have any hot water or heating for some time. As you know, we have been living in your place since December and also paid our rent on time. We have had not any hot water from last two weeks and it makes our life very difficult, especially during the midest of the winter. I called you last week and you said you would send the workmen within 2-3 days, but he didn’t came. After calling 4-5 times,

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• state your reason for writing
• describe the problems and explain how you feel
• propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action Dear Miss Grewal, I am the student of Cambridge School and one of your tenants in your property Golden Avenue.I am writing a complain about the fact that we do not have any hot water or heating for some time. As you know, we have been living in your place since December and also paid our rent on time.We have had not any hot water from last two weeks and it makes our life very difficult ,especially during the midest of the winter.I called you last week and you said you would send the workmen within 2-3 days ,but he didn’t came. After calling 4-5 times ,