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Your Local Hospital Has Advertised People To Do Unpaid Work Helping At The Hospital

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Dear Sir / Madam My name is Rashi Mehta. I reside opposite your hospital building. I am writing this letter to enquire about the advertisement published in the Times of India regarding volunteer work. I personally feel I will be an ideal candidate, because I recently resigned from my full-time job to take a break from work. I have sufficient leisure time which I can use effectively helping people in need. In addition, I have worked in an old age home before therefore, I posses the required skills. In my previous job as a volunteer, my duty was to give patients medicines on time and attend to their other needs such as providing them meals and assisting them to walk. I am comfortable performing any of the aforementioned tasks. Since, I mostly work part-time from home on weekdays. I shall be available from Monday thru Friday between 2 pm between 5 pm. My son usually comes back from college by 6: 30pm so I need to prepare him evening snacks before he arrives. I hope you find me suitable for this position. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Rashi Mehta
Dear Sir / Madam

My name is
Rashi
Mehta
. I reside opposite your hospital building. I am writing this letter to
enquire
about the advertisement published in
the Times of India
regarding volunteer work.

I
personally
feel I will be an ideal candidate,
because
I recently resigned from my full-time job to take a break from work.
I
have sufficient leisure time which I can
use
effectively
helping
people
in need.
In addition
, I have worked in an
old
age home
before
therefore
,
I posses
the required
skills
.

In my previous job as a volunteer, my duty was to give patients medicines on time and attend to their other needs such as providing them meals and assisting them to walk. I am comfortable performing any of the aforementioned tasks.

Since
, I
mostly
work part-time from home on weekdays. I shall be available from Monday
thru
Friday between 2 pm between 5 pm. My son
usually
comes
back from college by 6: 30pm
so
I need to prepare him evening snacks
before
he arrives. I hope you find me suitable for this position.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,
Rashi
Mehta
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IELTS letter Your Local Hospital Has Advertised People To Do Unpaid Work Helping At The Hospital

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
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