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last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion

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Dear Julia, How are you? I hope you're very well. I've got so much to tell that I don't know where to begin! Celebrating the party has been amazing so far! The party is absolutely wonderful. On a beautiful day, I have received my decision's boss that I was promoted so my colleagues made a decision to celebrate for me to make me surprised. oh my god, I'm over the moon to hear that and when I see them I burst into tears. My colleagues were good for me! Besides, When they hold a party, I see our relationships become better. You know that when We have time to share everything We will understand together. See you soon! Love, Anh Thu.
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IELTS letter last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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