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last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion

last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion K0MEM

Dear Julia, How are you? I hope you're very well. I've got so much to tell that I don't know where to begin! Celebrating the party has been amazing so far! The party is absolutely wonderful. On a beautiful day, I have received my decision's boss that I was promoted so my colleagues made a decision to celebrate for me to make me surprised. oh my god, I'm over the moon to hear that and when I see them I burst into tears. My colleagues were good for me! Besides, When they hold a party, I see our relationships become better. You know that when We have time to share everything We will understand together. See you soon! Love, Anh Thu.

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