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I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case , but my roommate behaves inconvenientely , that makes me unable to do my work

I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconvenientely, that makes me unable to do my work 6lnG3

I'm writing to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconveniently, so it makes me unable to do my work correctly. I hope you will concern the situation. Three months later there was no problem. Prior to that my old roommate was quite, but after he has left a new roommate was the issue his attitude totally unacceptable, play music loudly, that makes me unable to sleep well as a consequence I can't focus on my study

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IELTS letter I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconvenientely, that makes me unable to do my work

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

92 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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