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I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case , but my roommate behaves inconvenientely , that makes me unable to do my work

I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconvenientely, that makes me unable to do my work 6lnG3
I'm writing to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconveniently, so it makes me unable to do my work correctly. I hope you will concern the situation. Three months later there was no problem. Prior to that my old roommate was quite, but after he has left a new roommate was the issue his attitude totally unacceptable, play music loudly, that makes me unable to sleep well as a consequence I can't focus on my study
I'm writing to
let
you know that I'm not satisfied with my
current
accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case,
but
my roommate behaves
inconveniently
,
so
it
makes
me unable to do my work
correctly
. I hope you will concern the situation. Three months later there was no problem. Prior to that my
old
roommate was quite,
but
after he has
left
a new roommate was the issue his attitude
totally
unacceptable, play music
loudly
, that
makes
me unable to sleep well as a consequence I can't focus on my
study
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IELTS letter I'm writting to let you know that I'm not satisfied with my current accommodation, while the accommodation itself is not the case, but my roommate behaves inconvenientely, that makes me unable to do my work

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  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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