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A note: Studying a new subject You are studying English. You also want to study another subject. Write a note to your teacher. In your note: say what other subject you want to study say why you want to do this course say when you want to do this course ask your teacher to help you. Do not write your real name and surname or email address in your answer.

A note: Studying a new subject You are studying English. You also want to study another subject. Write a note to your teacher. In your note: say what other subject you want to study say why you want to do this course say when you want to do this course ask your teacher to help you. Do not write your real name and surname or email address in your answer. MBbB9
Dear teacher, The purpose of my writing to you is that I have taken English courses so far and have greatly improved my knowledge of English. My English proficiency has also increased significantly and I am even preparing for IELTS exams. I want to learn English perfectly. Teacher, you know, I've been very interested in computer design since I was young, in photoshop, because it's a real creativity to combine a simple picture with a variety of images and turn it into a wonderful work of art, and it always amazes and fascinates me. Since I don’t have much difficulty with English anymore and even the terms of computer engineering are in English, I don’t think I will have any problems in taking a computer design course and if possible I would have started training earlier this month. Teacher. If I don't bother you, can you help me sign up for this course by giving me some information about this course admission? I would be very grateful to you. Thanks in advance for your advice. Yours faithfully, Lola Akhmedova.
Dear teacher,

The purpose of my writing to you is that I have taken English
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significantly and
I am even preparing for IELTS exams. I want to learn English
perfectly
.

Teacher, you know, I've been
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very
interested in computer design since I was young, in photoshop,
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because
it's a real creativity to combine a simple picture with a variety of images and turn it into a wonderful work of art, and it always amazes and fascinates me.

Since I don’t have much difficulty with English anymore and even the terms of computer engineering are in English, I don’t
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think
I will have any problems in taking a computer design
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course
and if possible I would have
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started
training earlier this month.

Teacher. If I don't bother you, can you
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help
me
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sign
up for this
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course
by giving me
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some
information about this
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course
admission? I would be
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very
grateful to you. Thanks in advance for your advice.

Yours
faithfully
,

Lola
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IELTS letter A note: Studying a new subject You are studying English. You also want to study another subject. Write a note to your teacher. In your note: say what other subject you want to study say why you want to do this course say when you want to do this course ask your teacher to help you. Do not write your real name and surname or email address in your answer.

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6.0
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