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Letter to owner to payback deposited rent.

Letter to owner to payback deposited rent. gxwog

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you that, I vacated your apartment block A, room number 404, so before coming to the apartment I deposited three months rent, so payback my deposited money. Since from last four years with your apartment went well and recently I got transferred to another city which is a far distance to apartment and office, cause traveling problems. so I vacated the apartment in neat and clean condition. so it is your duty to fallow to pay back my deposited rent within a week. Suppose if you won't return my deposited cash within a week, I initiate the legal action under the rented control act, I hope you don't get involved in such conditions. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours Faithfully, Sharath Madishetty

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you that, I vacated your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 block A, room number 404, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 coming to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withamasssaveinvestdeliverstashcollect
deposited
 three months rent, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 payback my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withamasssaveinvestdeliverstashcollect
deposited
 money.

Since from last four years with your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 went well and recently I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 transferred to another city which is a far distance to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 and office, cause traveling problems. Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., so
so
 I vacated the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 in neat and clean condition. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 it is your duty to fallow to pay back my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withamasssaveinvestdeliverstashcollect
deposited
 rent within a week.

Suppose if you won't return my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withamasssaveinvestdeliverstashcollect
deposited
 cash within a week, I initiate the legal action under the rented control act, I hope you don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 involved in such conditions.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Faithfully
,

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