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Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centreM that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centreM that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed. 5Owm
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern about the recent decision by the local council to close down MBZ community centre for financial reasons. Closure of this community centre will deeply affect the people of community both physically and psychologically. To begin with, my family and friends extensively use this Centre for various activities. My wife and my mother take zumba and yoga classes everyday and the community centre. Me and my friends use the gym and sports facility frequently. In addition to that, this community centre is a favorite spot for the people around the neighborhood to socialize and celebrate various holidays and events. In fact, it is one of the few places where children can be safe and play freely. If the council still goes ahead with the decision to close the community centre, it will be a great loss to the community. Adults will find it difficult to socialize, children will be deprived of a safe place to play and have fun together. I sincerely request you to reconsider the decision. I look forward to hearing a positive outcome from the council. Yours faithfully, Kaleem Ul Haq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern about the recent decision by the local council to close down
MBZ
community
centre
for financial reasons. Closure of this
community
centre
will
deeply
affect the
people
of
community
both
physically
and
psychologically
.

To
begin
with, my family and friends
extensively
use
this
Centre
for various activities. My wife and my mother take
zumba
and yoga classes
everyday
and the
community
centre
.
Me
and my friends
use
the gym and sports facility
frequently
.

In addition
to that, this
community
centre
is a favorite spot for the
people
around the neighborhood to socialize and celebrate various holidays and
events
. In fact, it is one of the few places where children can be safe and play
freely
.

If the council
still
goes ahead with the decision to close the
community
centre
, it will be a great loss to the
community
. Adults will find it difficult to socialize, children will
be deprived
of a safe place to play and have fun together.

I
sincerely
request you to reconsider the decision. I look forward to hearing a
positive
outcome from the council.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kaleem
Ul
Haq
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centreM that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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