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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give contact details for when you are away • Give instructions about how to care for your pet • Describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give contact details for when you are away • Give instructions about how to care for your pet • Describe other household duties KrL0
Dear Asim, I want to thank you for accepting my request to look after my home and dog while I am away on vacations. As you know, I am going to the Maldives for a week. My UK mobile number will be working on roaming, but in case you want to contact me, Call me at Pengate Debus Resort 0097586589520 and ask for room number 653A, they will directly connect the line to me. Since you are going to take care of my pet, here are some instructions, which will help you to manage things well. I am feeding my dog around 8 am in the morning, filling the box and water bowl in his tinny house, as well as going for a walk with him in the evening at 6. 00 pm for 15 to 20 minutes. Apart from all of these, make sure the irrigation system in the backyard is on automatic mood and turn on the air conditioners on the first floor once a day to avoid the humidity and mold in the house. Best Regards Vishal
Dear
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Asim
,

I want to thank you for accepting my request to look after my home and dog while I am away on vacations.

As you know, I am going to the Maldives for a week. My UK mobile number will be working on roaming,
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in case you want to contact me, Call me at
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Pengate
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Debus
Resort 0097586589520 and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
room number 653A, they will
directly
connect the line to me.

Since you are going to take care of my pet, here are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
instructions, which will
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help
you to manage things well. I am feeding my dog around 8
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am in the morning
, filling the box and water bowl in his tinny
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house
,
as well
as going for a walk with him in the evening at 6. 00 pm for 15 to 20 minutes.

Apart from all of these,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the irrigation system in the backyard is on automatic mood and turn on the air conditioners on the
first
floor once a day to avoid the humidity and mold in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Best Regards

Vishal

IELTS letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give contact details for when you are away • Give instructions about how to care for your pet • Describe other household duties

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  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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