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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person OkX7

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the award that you organise for the people who have helped society in an appropriate way. I would like to propose friend of mine with below detailed reasons. I and John Conor are friends since we began to university in September, 2018. Since then, I have had a chance to see how helpful and merciful he is. He always endeavors to do his best in order to help people or to make any simple favour. That's why he could be one of the most suitable candidates for this award. He has been actively helping seniors in their daily routine. To be more precise, he pays visits to seniors at least 3 days in a week. He checks their needs whether they are lack of something at home. Moreover, he sometimes takes care of the cleaning of their homes. In addition to that, he often goes for a walk with their dogs as he adores the dogs too. On top of all of these, he has a checklist for their medicines to be able to control if everything is all right. In my view, a column in your newspaper about his volunteer works would be a great award for him. By this way, he could understand better how appreciated all his achievements are. I look forward to hearing from you in response to my suggestion. Yours faihfully, Adam Bergstein

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the award that you Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 society Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with the adverb for "appropriate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an appropriate way
. I would like to propose friend of mine with below detailed reasons.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 and John Conor are friends since we began to university in When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "September 2018".September 2018
September, 2018
. Since then, I have had a chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 how helpful and merciful he is. He always endeavors to do his best in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 or to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 any simple Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
. That's why he could be one of the most suitable candidates for this award.

He has been actively
 helping seniors in their daily routine. To be more precise, he pays visits to seniors at least 3 days in a week. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 their needs whether they are lack of something at home. Moreover
, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 takes care of the cleaning of their homes. In addition
 to that, he This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 goes for a walk with their dogs as he adores the dogs too. On top of all of these, he has a checklist for their medicines to be able to control if everything is all right.

In my view, a column in your newspaper about his volunteer works would be a great award for him. By this way, he could understand better how appreciated all his achievements are.

I look forward to hearing from you in response to my suggestion.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully
faihfully
, Adam Possible spelling mistake found.BernsteinBerg stein
Bergstein