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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away yVQr
Dear Mr. Vee, I am writing to get some days off from work. I know there is a presentation coming soon. I do realize that you wanted me to work on it as is immensely important for our company. Unfortunately, I have to fly back to my hometown as my grandfather is very ill. I am interested in getting at least a week off. So, I could go visit my grandfather. Recently, my mom called me and explained that he wants to see me. His current condition is extremely awful. He has stopped eating at all and his medications are not responding anymore. I just want to go and see him. Maybe, I will be able to cheer him up. Hopefully, I would be able to give him a reason to fight back for his life again. I assure you that I will try my best to cover as much as from home. I will stay in contact with my colleagues. As a result, I will not miss any new updates. In addition to that, I will do overtime after coming back to finish all the back-logs. Thank you for your consideration. I await your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Iris
Dear Mr.
Vee
,

I am writing to
get
some
days off from work. I know there is a presentation coming
soon
.
I
do realize that you wanted me to work on it as is
immensely
important
for our
company
. Unfortunately, I
have to
fly
back to my hometown as my grandfather is
very
ill.

I
am interested
in getting at least a week off.
So
, I could go visit my grandfather. Recently, my mom called me and
explained
that he wants to
see
me. His
current
condition is
extremely
awful. He has
stopped
eating at all and his medications are not responding anymore. I
just
want to go and
see
him. Maybe, I will be able to cheer him up.
Hopefully
, I would be able to give him a reason to fight back for his life again.

I assure you that I will try my best to cover as much as from home. I will stay in contact with my colleagues.
As a result
, I will not miss any new updates.
In addition
to that, I will do overtime after coming back to finish all the back-logs.

Thank you for your consideration. I await your prompt response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Iris
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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