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your local council considering closing a local sport and leisure facility that is run in order to save money . write a letter to the council to stop the closing of same.

your local council considering closing a local sport and leisure facility that is run in order to save money. write a letter to the council to stop the closing of same. PXg2X
This well-considered letter regards your erroneous thought towards closing the doors of our regional sports and leisure facility. First, this gym must remain open for the members of my family who reside here as a longstanding community representatives. Both my father and mother have a long-term disability called ulcerative colitis; so, to keep their digestive system healthy, they depend on the fitness center of our local area. Not only do my parents take advantage of this fitness center, but also my elder brother’s cricket team does their routine practice for state-level tournaments. As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall how sports and leisure facility integrates the community. Due to our geographical weather conditions, snow and ice exist four months a year, and the center remains the only winter leisure activity option. Moreover, a gymnasium embodies a meeting place for the community that promotes social connections and strengthens our neighborhood relationships.
This well-considered letter regards your erroneous
thought
towards closing the doors of our regional sports and leisure facility.

First
, this gym
must
remain open for the members of my family who reside here as a longstanding community
representatives
. Both my father and mother have a long-term disability called ulcerative colitis;
so
, to
keep
their digestive system healthy, they depend on the fitness center of our local area. Not
only
do my parents take advantage of this fitness center,
but
also
my elder brother’s cricket team does their routine practice for state-level tournaments.

As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall how sports and leisure facility integrates the community. Due to our geographical weather conditions, snow and ice exist four months a year, and the center remains the
only
winter leisure activity option.
Moreover
, a gymnasium embodies a meeting place for the community that promotes social connections and strengthens our neighborhood relationships.
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IELTS letter your local council considering closing a local sport and leisure facility that is run in order to save money. write a letter to the council to stop the closing of same.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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