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the maps below show Colwick Arts Centre

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These 2 maps demonstrate the changes of Colwick Arts Centre undergone from 2005 up to now. A quick look suggests several noticeable changes from construction of new buildings to providing green area. Commencing with the west part of the map, The meeting room is separated into 2 individual rooms located in the upper left-hand corner and the drama studio has been built on the right side of them. The snack bar has been developed into a café and moved to the bottom of the Art Center. The two galleries were been merged and moved to the west, on top of the café in order to expansion of concert hall. The new toilet which is half in size, is relocated to the opposite side. Cinema and the concert hall that are next to each other, were shared the building in the middle of the center in the past. As this common building demolished, the central exhibition area has been built there in a round shape. One of the most remarkable modifications is transformation of the wasteland to the outdoor exhibition and performance area in the south of the art center. It contains a stage surrounded by trees. notwithstanding all these considerable changes, the information desk has been remained in its place.

These 2 maps demonstrate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of Colwick Arts Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 undergone from 2005 up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. A quick look suggests several noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 from construction of new buildings to providing green area.

Commencing with the west part of the map, The meeting room is separated
 into 2 individual rooms located in the upper This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand corner and the drama studio has been built
 on the right side of them. The snack bar has been developed
 into a café and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the bottom of the Art Center. The two galleries were been
 merged and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the west, on top of the café in order to expansion of concert hall.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 new toilet which is half in size, is relocated
 to the opposite side. Cinema and the concert hall that are next
 to each other, were shared
 the building in the middle of the center in the past. As this common building demolished, the central exhibition area has been built
 there in a round shape.

One of the most remarkable modifications is transformation of the wasteland to the outdoor exhibition and performance area in the south of the art center. It contains a stage surrounded by trees. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNotwithstanding
notwithstanding
 all these considerable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, the information desk has been remained
 in its place. 