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There is an important occasion you have to attend in person and you want to ask your boss for a leave

There is an important occasion you have to attend in person and you want to ask your boss for a leave rk11m

Dear Ms. Fiona I am sorry to bother you during this time when the company is extremely busy, but my mother has become seriously ill, and I need to go back home to see her as soon as possible. I got a call from the nurse who responsible to take care of my mother yesterday. She told me about my mother's health problem. She is really helpful, but it would be good if I able to look after my mom since she is getting worse. I plan to leave for 2 weeks and try to return to work if it possible. In order for the work to continue as smothly as possible, I already talk to Tiffany as the best person to help my work while I am away. She is really closely with me and know well what needs to be done. If there any questions or problems during my absence, she can contact me by phone or email to clarify any issues. Thank you very much in advance for your understanding in this matter. Yours sincerely, Tram

Dear Ms. Fiona

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company
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got
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who responsible
 to take care of my mother yesterday. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
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but
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 able to look after my mom since she is getting worse. I plan to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for 2 weeks and try to return to work if Did you mean "it is"?it is
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In order for the work to continue as Possible spelling mistake found.smoothly
smothly
 as possible, I already talk to Tiffany as the best person to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my work while I am away. She is really
closely
 with me and know well what needs to be done
. If Please check whether a verb is missing here or whether 'there' should be 'their'.their any
there any
 questions or problems during my absence, she can contact me by phone or email to clarify any issues.

Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much in advance for your understanding in this matter.

Yours sincerely
,

Tram