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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Should private schools receive government funding? 7pr8n
My openion for Private school should receive government funding is affirmative. Yes they should receive fund from government. Cause We the students who are not able to study in a Government Schools are need to do our schooling in private one. Which is way more Expensive for us. If government provide some funding over there, School management can reduce the expense of schooling. And also the good student who are trying to do better in there sector can get a scholarship on basis of their result. This can inspire that student to do better in future. If i can give an example of my own experience, than i can say that I was get chance to teach a student who was in a private school. She and her family was always feeling tensed for that High expense of that school. That student was so much talented but because of that high expense of school, She always felt nervous. After that I tried to Help that Student financially. And Surprisingly that Student do a great result after that, cause she was not have any concern of Expenses. Its just an example of a Single student. Every student might be feeling like this. That is why I am feeling that Private school should receive Government funding, so that School can give their service Goodly and Student can give their level best
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should receive
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funding is affirmative. Yes they should receive fund from
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government
.
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students
who are not able to study in a
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Schools
are need
to do our schooling in
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private
one. Which is way more Expensive for us. If
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government
provide
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some
funding over there,
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School
management can
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reduce
the
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expense
of schooling. And
also
the
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good
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student
who are trying to do better in
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there
sector can
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get
a scholarship on basis of their result. This can inspire that
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student
to do better
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in future
. If
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i
can give an example of my
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experience,
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than
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i
can say that I was
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get
chance to teach a
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student
who was in a
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private
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school
. She and her family was always feeling tensed for that High
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expense
of that
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school
. That
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was
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so
much talented
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but
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of that high
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expense
of
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school
, She always felt nervous.
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that
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Student
financially
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that
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do a great result after that,
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cause she
was not
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have
any concern of Expenses. Its
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just
an example of a Single
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student
. Every
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student
might be feeling like this.
That is
why I am feeling that
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Private
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school
should receive
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Government
funding,
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so
that
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School
can give their service Goodly and
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Student
can give their level
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best
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IELTS letter : Should private schools receive government funding?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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