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Letter to you friend, who needs to send her child to your house

Letter to you friend, who needs to send her child to your house 9YQlx

Dear Sega, I am really glad that you have finally decided to send Amy to my house. My daughter, Jane was existed when she heard this news. She and I are impatiently waiting for this weekend. I would suggest you to send Amy on Saturday, because I am unavailable on Sunday. I am free the whole day on Saturday. Hence, send Amy in the morning itself so that we can spend the whole day together. Jane has been asking me for a long time to take her to the Wonderland Amusement Park. I think Amy will also like it. Hence, I am planning to take them both to Wonderland this Saturday. I am sure that they will love the day. In the evening, we will go for a movie also. Probably, in the Ann theater. I will drop Amy in your house around 10 pm. Hope you will be available at that time in your home. I can't wait to see you. Meet you this Saturday. Yours lovingly, John Joseph.

Dear Sega,

I am really
 glad that you have finally
 decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 Amy to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. My daughter, Jane was existed
 when she heard this news. She and I are impatiently
 waiting for this weekend.

I would suggest you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 Amy on Saturday, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am unavailable on Sunday. I am free the whole day on Saturday. Hence
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 Amy in the morning itself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can spend the whole day together.

Jane has been asking me for a long time to take her to the Wonderland Amusement Park. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 Amy will also
 like it. Hence
, I am planning to take them both to Wonderland this Saturday. I am sure that they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the day. In the evening, we will go for a movie also
. Probably
, in the Ann theater. I will drop Amy in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 around 10 pm. Hope you will be available at that time in your home.

I can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
Meet
 you this Saturday.

Yours lovingly
, John Joseph. 