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Letter to you friend, who needs to send her child to your house

Letter to you friend, who needs to send her child to your house 9YQlx
Dear Sega, I am really glad that you have finally decided to send Amy to my house. My daughter, Jane was existed when she heard this news. She and I are impatiently waiting for this weekend. I would suggest you to send Amy on Saturday, because I am unavailable on Sunday. I am free the whole day on Saturday. Hence, send Amy in the morning itself so that we can spend the whole day together. Jane has been asking me for a long time to take her to the Wonderland Amusement Park. I think Amy will also like it. Hence, I am planning to take them both to Wonderland this Saturday. I am sure that they will love the day. In the evening, we will go for a movie also. Probably, in the Ann theater. I will drop Amy in your house around 10 pm. Hope you will be available at that time in your home. I can't wait to see you. Meet you this Saturday. Yours lovingly, John Joseph.
Dear Sega,

I am
really
glad that you have
finally
decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
Amy to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. My daughter, Jane
was existed
when she heard this news. She and I are
impatiently
waiting for this weekend.

I would suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
Amy on Saturday,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am unavailable on Sunday. I am free the whole day on Saturday.
Hence
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
Amy in the morning itself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we can spend the whole day together.

Jane has been asking me for a long time to take her to the Wonderland Amusement Park. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
Amy will
also
like it.
Hence
, I am planning to take them both to Wonderland this Saturday. I am sure that they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the day. In the evening, we will go for a movie
also
.
Probably
, in the Ann theater. I will drop Amy in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
around 10 pm. Hope you will be available at that time in your home.

I can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Meet
you this Saturday.

Yours
lovingly
, John Joseph.
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IELTS letter Letter to you friend, who needs to send her child to your house

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  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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