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Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take gKmL

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you about quitting the course. The company where I work full time, is facing big issues regarding profit margins. My boss is stressed out hence, giving us more workload. Due to this reason, I must build strategies to increase our marketing, and sales. Now a days, working late nights and bringing work home is a common practise. This job is putting me under pressure, I hardly have the time to study for the course. Therefore, I am not able to continue the evening classes. After I am done with the work, I would resume studies. I hope you understand my situation and consider my letter. Yours sincerely, Amit Mittal

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you about quitting the course. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 where I work full time, is facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 issues regarding profit margins. My boss is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
 out hence
, giving us more workload.

Due to this reason, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 build strategies to increase our marketing, and sales. Did you mean "nowadays"?Nowadays
Now a days
, working late nights and bringing work home is a common Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.practice
practise
. This job is putting me under pressure, I hardly have the time to study for the course. Therefore
, I am not able to continue the evening classes.

After I am done
 with the work, I would resume studies. I hope you understand my situation and consider my letter.

Yours sincerely
,

Amit Possible spelling mistake found.Mitral
Mittal

IELTS letter Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

118 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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