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Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take gKmL
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing this letter to inform you about quitting the course. The company where I work full time, is facing big issues regarding profit margins. My boss is stressed out hence, giving us more workload. Due to this reason, I must build strategies to increase our marketing, and sales. Now a days, working late nights and bringing work home is a common practise. This job is putting me under pressure, I hardly have the time to study for the course. Therefore, I am not able to continue the evening classes. After I am done with the work, I would resume studies. I hope you understand my situation and consider my letter. Yours sincerely, Amit Mittal
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to inform you about quitting the course. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
where I work full time, is facing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
issues regarding profit margins. My boss is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stressed
out
hence
, giving us more workload.

Due to this reason, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
build strategies to increase our marketing, and sales.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
, working late nights and bringing work home is a common
Possible spelling mistake. 'practise' is British English.
practise
. This job is putting me under pressure, I hardly have the time to study for the course.
Therefore
, I am not able to continue the evening classes.

After I
am done
with the work, I would resume studies. I hope you understand my situation and consider my letter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Amit
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Mittal
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IELTS letter Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

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  American English
6 paragraphs
118 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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