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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. PBBB

Dear Gobie, I am writing this letter to inform you about the course that I recently read about online. This course is called Fundamentals of web development with Google cloud platform and It has good reviews from previous participants. This course will start from march 15th and will be three days long and will be hosted online by udemy. I think this course will help me advance my development skills and further my career options, which can be a crucial step in my career as this course will help me learn a completely new domain that is trending right now in web development. So, I would like to request you to support me and It would be a great help if you can grant me leave for 3 days starting 15th until 18th of march. I believe that It will not be busy on these particular days but I am prepared to work extra hours during the evening if needed. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Alay Desai

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but
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 to work extra hours during the evening if needed.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely


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