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You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say, why did you move there, describe the new apartment invite him/her to visit you

You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say, why did you move there, describe the new apartment invite him/her to visit you xrAw
Dear mahin Hope you and your family all well, as you know i am hectic at moment, i am happy to tell you that last month I got a promotion and i have move Rajshahi To Dhaka. you know very well, i have been working for western union bank for five yea, recently i have got promotion, i also got a a transfer to the head office at dhaka. Dhaka is the of the beautiful city in Bangladesh, i got a apartment near my head office, which is located near banani-5. I moved in n two week ago, it’s a beautiful apartment, as well as there are two bedrooms and a kitchen, therefore, very famous shopping center near to my apartment l, in front of my apartment has a big garden, furthermore huge space for car parking, as u know, as a early-bird everyday i can walking into my apartment even cycling as well. Why don’t come for few days, i hope you will like it, we will visit the famous museum and share some nostalgic memory of our collage year. Hoping to see you soon! Best regards, Mahmid
Dear
mahin


Hope you and your family all well, as you know
i
am hectic at moment,
i
am happy to
tell
you that last month I
got
a promotion and
i
have
move
Rajshahi
To Dhaka.

you
know
very
well,
i
have been working for
western union
bank for five yea, recently
i
have
got
promotion,
i
also
got
a a
transfer to the head office at
dhaka
.

Dhaka is the of the
beautiful
city in Bangladesh,
i
got
a
apartment
near my head office, which
is located
near banani-5. I
moved
in n two
week
ago, it’s a
beautiful
apartment
,
as well
as there are two bedrooms and a kitchen,
therefore
,
very
famous
shopping center near to my
apartment
l, in front of my
apartment
has a
big
garden,
furthermore
huge space for car parking, as u know, as
a
early-bird
everyday
i
can walking into my
apartment
even cycling
as well
.

Why don’t
come
for few days,
i
hope you will like it, we will visit the
famous
museum and share
some
nostalgic memory of our collage year.

Hoping to
see
you
soon
!

Best regards,

Mahmid
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IELTS letter You recently moved to a new apartment. Write to your friend and say, why did you move there, describe the new apartment invite him/her to visit you

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  American English
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188 words
6.0
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