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You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................

You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . n7Ag
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request leave for the next month from 1st till 31st of May as my wedding date has been finalized and there are a lot of things that have to be taken care of. Well, to begin with, wedding is one of the colossal events in anyone's life and it comes with many formalities and functions. Apart from the ceremonies, there a number of activities that I have to deal with ranging from jewellery and attire shopping to catering and hotel bookings. On the contrary, I have been recently assigned a new project which has to be completed the next week. Since the deadline is next week and this is quite a crucial assignment, it is my responsibility to make sure that nothing affects the smooth completion of the project. As per my discussion with John, he has have stepped in to fill in for me and finish the task. As both of us are from the same department, there won't be any sort of confusion in terms of execution of the project. In addition to this, I have already briefed John about the project and shared all the required information with him. Every day, he will be completing 2 files and give a report to you for the same. Thus, there would not be any project related issue. Kindly approve my leave so that I can begin working on my wedding shopping plans. Yours Truly Josh
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request
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leave
for the
next
month from 1st till 31st of May as my wedding date has
been finalized
and there are
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a lot of
things that
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have to
be taken
care of.

Well, to
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begin
with, wedding is one of the colossal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
in anyone's life and it
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comes
with
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many
formalities and functions. Apart from the ceremonies, there a number of activities that I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
deal with ranging from
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jewellery
and attire shopping to catering and hotel bookings.

On the contrary
, I have been recently assigned a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
be completed
the
next
week. Since the deadline is
next
week and this is quite a crucial assignment, it is my responsibility to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that nothing affects the smooth completion of the project.

As per my discussion with John, he has have stepped in to fill in for me and finish the task. As both of us are from the same department, there won't be any sort of confusion in terms of execution of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
.
In addition
to this, I have already briefed John about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
and shared all the required information with him. Every day, he will be completing 2 files and give a report to you for the same.
Thus
, there would not be any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
project
related issue.

Kindly approve my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
working on my wedding shopping plans.

Yours
Truly


Josh
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IELTS letter You need to take leave from your work for almost a month for some personal reasons. Write a letter to your Manager. In your letter: • Explain the reason for your leave & the length of your leave. • Explain how you intend to deliver the task that was given to you recently and has to be turned in in a week’s time. • Explain how & who will look after your work while you are away. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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243 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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