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Dear Madam/SirI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery which i got yesterday of my order which i placed on march 8, 2021I am pooja rani and i am very frequent online customer to your company.

Dear Madam/SirI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery which i got yesterday of my order which i placed on march 8, 2021I am pooja rani and i am very frequent online customer to your company. Qmmx
Dear Madam/SirI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery which i got yesterday of my order which i placed on march 8, 2021I am pooja rani and i am very frequent online customer to your company. last Monday i ordered sewing machine through your online website which called www. amazon. com. my order number was UR388875. when i opened my parcel i was very frustrated to find that foot pedal of the machine was missing. i will attached the picture for your reference. In relation to the specific of the order, I purchase this to give a birthday gift to my mother and the fault delivery from your end has made all the efforts go down the vain. I am highly disappointed with this kind of service as a regular customer. i negligence on your part has made the purchase worthless. to avoid further embarrassment i would suggest you that please send me other replacement of my order as soon as you can. i am looking forward to get my replacement sooner. your sincerelypooja rani
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writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery which
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placed on
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march
8, 2021I am
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rani
and
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last
Monday
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ordered sewing machine through your online website which called
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www
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amazon
.
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com
.
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my
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order
number was UR388875.
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when
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i
opened my parcel
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was
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very
frustrated to find that foot pedal of the machine was missing.
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will
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attached
the picture for your reference. In relation to the specific of the
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order
, I
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purchase
this to give a birthday gift to my mother and the fault delivery from your
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end
has made all the efforts go down the vain. I am
highly
disappointed with this kind of service as a regular customer.
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i
negligence on your part has made the
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purchase
worthless.
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to
avoid
further
embarrassment
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i
would suggest you that
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send
me other replacement of my
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as
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as you can.
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am looking forward to
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get
my replacement sooner.
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your
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sincerelypooja
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rani

IELTS letter Dear Madam/SirI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery which i got yesterday of my order which i placed on march 8, 2021I am pooja rani and i am very frequent online customer to your company.

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