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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of your team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Tell him which team won. • Describe the condition on the day. • Say how you felt about the match.

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of your team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Tell him which team won. • Describe the condition on the day. • Say how you felt about the match. qoAX
Dear Raymond, I was so sorry about your accident. I hope you’re feeling much better than before. Anyways, we had played a cricket match without you but we lost the game. As you know, we have short-listed bowlers in our group, and I know you have the best bowling capacity. But we had been keeping control of the limited score with our medium quality team but their batting lineup was excellent. They did massive score agents us. We weren’t able to protect any run and when we were doing our bating we didn’t touch the final target, before that we had all out and finally they won the game. It was such a complicated match I had played without you. I missed you a lot, and I had realized how much important you’re to our team. I was thinking if I could bring you on the ground from the hospital then probably the scenario could be different. I believe you will get back to us very soon on the ground. Take care of yourself. Regards, Mehidi hasan sagor
Dear Raymond,

I was
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sorry about your accident. I hope you’re feeling much better than
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before
. Anyways, we had played a cricket match without you
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but
we lost the game.

As you know, we have short-listed bowlers in our group, and I know you have the best bowling capacity.
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But
we had been keeping control of the limited score with our medium quality team
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but
their batting lineup was excellent. They did massive score agents us. We weren’t able to protect any run and when we were doing our bating we didn’t touch the final target,
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before
that we had all out and
finally
they won the game.

It was such a complicated match I had played without you. I missed you a lot, and I had realized how much
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important
you’re to our team. I was thinking if I could bring you on the ground from the hospital then
probably
the scenario could be
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different
.

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believe you will
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back to us
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very
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soon
on the ground. Take care of yourself.

Regards,

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Mehidi
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sagor

IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of your team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Tell him which team won. • Describe the condition on the day. • Say how you felt about the match.

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