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Your grandparents are planning a family gathering

Your grandparents are planning a family gathering w7Vnm

Dear Grandparents, I hope you all are doing good. I understand that you want to have family trip in coming weekend. I would like to recommend Toronto Centre Island would be a best place for our family gets together. Because I have been visited this place last year with my friends. I have some experience on this place. I thought of sharing those experiences to you. This place is having big park and there is an amusement park in it. we can spend some daytime here. Also, there is a mini golf and lake shore we can do fishing in the lake shore. Also, we can have silent evening where we can spend more time for our conversations. Please let me know are you guys fine with this place. I can reserve room in Tukona hotel room for night stay which is available inside Island itself in advance since summertime it will be fully busy. I look forward to hearing from you. Love John.

Dear Grandparents,

I hope you all are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I understand that you want to have family trip in coming weekend.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 would like to recommend Toronto Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
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 best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 for our family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 together. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
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 last year with my friends. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experience on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 of sharing those experiences to you.

This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 is having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 park and there is an amusement park in it. we can spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 daytime here. Also
, there is a mini golf and lake shore we can The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go fishing".go fishing
do fishing
 in the lake shore. Also
, we can have silent evening where we can spend more time for our conversations. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know are you guys fine with this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. I can reserve room in Possible spelling mistake found.YukonTuna
Tukona
 hotel room for night stay which is available inside Island itself in advance since Consider using "summer".summer
summertime
 it will be fully
 busy.

I look forward to hearing from you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love


John. 