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Dolphin behavior in marine life

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Teri Turner Bolton is dolphin’s head trainer at the Roatán Institute for Marine Sciences (RIMS). In this institution, the dolphins are trained to perform many movements such as corkscrew, or spin through the air, ect when receiving the command. More than just performances, the scientists at RIMS are also curious about dolphin’s thoughts. When scientists issue dolphins the hand signal to “innovate”, they dip below the surface and come up to show many other movements which do not repeat anything before. More extraordinarily, they even show the new actions in unison whenever they are given the signal “tandem”. There are two suppositions for dolphins' behaviors including that the obvious coordination is illusion (they mimic the others) or it is not illusion (they are discussing when they whistle back and forth). Moreover, dolphins have a very fascinating nature and behavior as extremely “talkative”, using sound to practice young dolphins and chase away sharks. Scientists believe that dolphin’s behavior could possibly be meaningful because dolphins use “signature whistles” to identify and call to others, or they name for themselves, and they especially remember the signature whistles for decades. Denise Herzing, a scientist, has spent 30 years doing long-term research about dolphins. Now, by using the CHAT box, she has recorded and logged thousands of hours of footage of each individual spotted dolphins crossing three generations at Atlantic.
Teri Turner Bolton is dolphin’s head trainer at the
Roatán
Institute for Marine Sciences (RIMS). In this institution, the dolphins
are trained
to perform
many
movements such as corkscrew, or spin through the air,
ect
when receiving the command. More than
just
performances, the
scientists
at RIMS are
also
curious about dolphin’s thoughts. When
scientists
issue dolphins the hand signal to “innovate”, they dip below the surface and
come
up to
show
many
other movements which do not repeat anything
before
. More
extraordinarily
, they even
show
the new actions in unison whenever they are
given
the signal “tandem”. There are two suppositions for dolphins' behaviors including that the obvious coordination is illusion (they mimic the others) or it is not illusion (they are discussing when they whistle back and forth).
Moreover
, dolphins have a
very
fascinating nature and behavior as
extremely
“talkative”, using sound to practice young dolphins and chase away sharks.
Scientists
believe that dolphin’s behavior could
possibly
be meaningful
because
dolphins
use
“signature whistles” to identify and call to others, or they name for themselves, and they
especially
remember the signature whistles for decades. Denise
Herzing
, a
scientist
, has spent 30 years doing long-term research about dolphins.
Now
, by using the CHAT box, she has recorded and logged thousands of hours of footage of each individual spotted dolphins crossing three generations
at Atlantic
.
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