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You are invited to the monthly study in Samarkand.Ask the manager of the hotel where you will stay on to give you on apartment with some convenience.

You are invited to the monthly study in Samarkand. Ask the manager of the hotel where you will stay on to give you on apartment with some convenience. d3KJo
I am writing to inform you to give me an apartment to stay in the hotel for a monthly. However, I find a hostel an other places but it was very far from my university. I would appreciate you immediate attention to this matter. Firstly, I wonder if you could give me a small room from your hotel it is not suitable for me, because I have a lot of significant documents and technican equipments. Secondly, I would be interested in fascinating and cozy room. I want to watch from the window this landscape and playground. It makes an impression to me and hard studying. First of all, it must be a single room for me, nobody disturbs my learning. I am looking forward you to give me comfortable room for staying me this room. Although, I promisethis room to save tidy and clean. Your sincerely. Nigora.
I am writing to inform you to give me an apartment to stay in the hotel for a monthly.
However
, I find a hostel
This word is normally spelled as one.
an other
places
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
far from my university. I would appreciate you immediate attention to this matter.
Firstly
, I wonder if you could give me a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
from your hotel it is not suitable for me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I have
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a lot of
significant documents and
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technican
equipments.
Secondly
, I would
be interested
in fascinating and cozy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
from the window this landscape and playground. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
an impression to me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
studying.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it
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must
be a single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
for me, nobody disturbs my learning. I am looking forward you to give me comfortable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
for staying me this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. Although, I
Possible spelling mistake found.
promisethis
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
to save tidy and clean. Your
sincerely
.
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Nigora
.
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IELTS letter You are invited to the monthly study in Samarkand. Ask the manager of the hotel where you will stay on to give you on apartment with some convenience.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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