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Thank friends for holiday and photos

Thank friends for holiday and photos PL9bp
Dear Niki and Vlad, How are you both? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to thank you both for photos you shared of our holiday. I received it today morning. I want to thank you both not only for the memorable holiday but also for the beautiful pictures you shares. I must say that India is a beautiful country with rich cultural heritage. It was an amazing holdiday. I wills cherish these memories for rest of my life. You both are the best hosts I have ever met. Your hospitality was amazing. I want to apologies as I couldn’t write earlier. The movement I landed here in Cananda, my younger son met with an accident. He got hurt while playing with his friends. I was busing looking after him. But now he is fine and I am back to the normal. I am celebrating my 40th birthday next month. I know you always wanted to visit Cananda. I would like to invite you come and stay with us. Weather is pleasant during this period of year. You both will get a chance to meet other family members. We have a spare room. You both can use it as long as you want. I am looking forward to see you soon. Please take can and write back. Yours Faithfully, Mary Janne
Dear Niki and Vlad,

How are you both? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to thank you both for photos you shared of our holiday.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
received it
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "this morning" is used.
today morning
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to thank you both not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for the memorable holiday
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
pictures you
The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "share"
shares
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that India is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
country with rich cultural heritage. It was an amazing
Possible spelling mistake found.
holdiday
. I
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "will"
wills
cherish these memories for rest of my life. You both are the best hosts I have ever met. Your hospitality was amazing.

I want
Did you mean "to apologize" (American English) or "to apologise" (British English)?
to apologies
as I couldn’t write earlier. The movement I landed here in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cananda
, my younger son met with an accident. He
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
hurt while playing with his friends. I was busing looking after him.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
he is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
fine and
I am back to the normal.

I am celebrating my 40th birthday
next
month. I know you always wanted to visit
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cananda
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to invite you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and stay with us. Weather is pleasant during this period of year. You both will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
other family members. We have a spare room. You both can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it as long as you want.

I am looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
take can and write back.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mary
Possible spelling mistake found.
Janne
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IELTS letter Thank friends for holiday and photos

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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