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descrise your event or happen in childhood

descrise your event or happen in childhood 5B8kD
Dear sir, Nice to meet you. I am a student at ABC High School Recently i have a problem about remember important fact. M1y friend was introduced your course for me to improving memory. I am a student growing up, upcoming i will have a nation college extrance exam so i need your course to solve my memory help me can improve to prepare this exam. I was found a way to improved my memory but it difficult to me. Sometime i have an important information but i can't remind this, then i was passed many importan information. Now, i still find rather way and i find to your course. I am not sure i can't do better before but i hope your course can help me. It will be fine if u give me some more details ìnormation about methods that use on the course. Now i have a many free time so u can show the time i can go here. I think your course can help me and i will look forward to your reply.
Dear sir,

Nice to
meet
you. I am a student at ABC High
School


Recently
i
have a problem about remember
important
fact. M1y friend
was introduced
your
course
for me to improving memory. I am a student growing up, upcoming
i
will have a nation college
extrance
exam
so
i
need your
course
to solve my memory
help
me can
improve
to prepare this exam. I
was found
a way to
improved
my memory
but
it
difficult to me
. Sometime
i
have an
important
information
but
i
can't remind this, then
i
was passed
many
importan
information.
Now
,
i
still
find
rather
way and
i
find to your
course
. I am not sure
i
can't do better
before
but
i
hope your
course
can
help
me. It will be fine if u give me
some
more
details
ìnormation
about methods that
use
on the
course
.
Now
i
have a
many
free time
so
u can
show
the time
i
can go here. I
think
your
course
can
help
me and
i
will look forward to your reply.
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IELTS letter descrise your event or happen in childhood

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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