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writing this letter to request a refund of the amount of $1000.

writing this letter to request a refund of the amount of $1000. LLRyn
I am writing this letter to request a refund of the amount of $1000. Months before I rent your apartment I was writing this household deposit $ 1000, but now when I go to other places I want to get back my money. when I called your office, I was informed by the staff there that I could only get my deposit back if the house was in its original condition and undamaged. Then I did the same you go check the house and did not detect damage or harm, but when I told you to give me back $ 1, 000 for me, then you have the attitude evasive and does not intend intend to return. you told me that you will refund me next week but till today i have not received a dime and cannot contact you. I can't accept if the house has no damage compared to the original but you still do not refund my deposit. You broke our original agreement so I'll give you 3 more days to refund. If you are still stubborn and do not take any action, I will sue you and seek legal help. I hope that you will make a decision as soon as
I am writing this letter to request a
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refund
of the amount of $1000.

Months
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before
I rent your apartment I was writing this household deposit
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$ 1000
,
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but
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now
when I go to other places I want to
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get
back my money.
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when
I called your office, I
was informed
by the staff there that I could
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only
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get
my deposit back if the
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house
was in its original condition and undamaged. Then I did the same you go
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check
the
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house
and did not detect damage or harm,
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but
when I
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told
you to give me back
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$ 1
, 000 for me, then you have the attitude evasive and does not
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intend intend
to return.
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you
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told
me that you will
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refund
me
next
week
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but
till
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today
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i
have not received a dime and cannot contact you. I can't accept if the
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house
has no damage compared to the original
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but
you
still
do not
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refund
my deposit.

You broke our original agreement
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so
I'll give you 3 more days to
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refund
. If you are
still
stubborn and do not take any action, I will sue you and seek legal
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help
. I hope that you will
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make
a decision as
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soon
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IELTS letter writing this letter to request a refund of the amount of $1000.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
204 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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